Essay Writing Tips (Examiner’s Report 2024)

I always find it helpful reading the examiner’s reports but in recent years I have also found them highly frustrating, vague and somewhat unfair. This year’s Philosophy and Ethics reports come with very few surprises, a selection of helpful pointers (which I summarise below) and a general repetition of previous years’ comments. However the Christian Thought section infuriated me due to the clear disparity in expectations (with the other modules of the course) and a complete disregard of the cohort of students we teach. Can I order a reality check please?

Helpful all-round pointers:

Best AnswersWhat to Avoid
Selected relevant material. Selection of material in response to Q is as much about what is left out as what is put in. Unclear why certain arguments were brought into an answer e.g. Tillich’s symbol in Aquinas’ analogy. This works but only when evaluatively.
https://www.youtube.com/shorts/Fs-9Rx6q9Po
Weaker students wrote everything they knew. Questions are intended to test how well candidates can use the material to respond to a specific question. Not just a recall test. Need to think and plan responses, rather than seeing a key word and launching into a pre prepared answer.
Focus directly on the Q. Most successful responses focused on the specific words in the Q e.g. the word ‘sufficient’ found in the Q can change the direction of an answer.
https://www.youtube.com/shorts/9VRdJjEvFes
https://www.youtube.com/shorts/KdZnPH98LNk
Evaluation was juxtaposed rather than developed. This means that arguments, such as those presented by key scholars, are simply stated (regurgitated info) rather than exploring why they are relevant and how their argument impacts your overall discussion.
Introduction included an outline of what was going to be argued with hypothesis and reasoning. Outlining thesis/ judgment in introduction.
https://www.youtube.com/shorts/azNF-rVAKWg
Absence of planning was noticeable.  
Structure your paragraphs by starting with a view, rather than a name, which tends to lean to an essay that is driven by A02 rather than A01.
https://www.youtube.com/shorts/QIQj6v2_a4U
Having a simplistic view of content.  
Embed discussion, use the material as a vehicle for discussion (A02). Argument driven approach rather than stating criticisms of scholars.
https://www.youtube.com/shorts/RoJn9UlkVGQ
Longer essays are not necessarily better – focus can drift.  
Relevant synoptic links made.  
https://youtube.com/shorts/xstsllLKJqc
Being synoptic can lead to time wasted exploring other topics that did not significantly increase credit for the question being answered.  
Unnamed scholarly views can be credited highly – you don’t need a ‘menu of scholars’ (love this phrase, already used it two or three times in my lessons already!).  
https://www.youtube.com/shorts/qwsMq8j7d3E
Unnecessary comparisons with other theories. For example in a Cosmological question contrasting with Teleological and/or Ontological – WHY would you do this?!? – unless fuelling the debate – multiple concepts can dilute the responses made – don’t ‘shoehorn’ other aspects of the course into answers.

Stay tuned for the summary of the DCT section of the examiner’s report, which needs a far more in-depth exploration. Coming soon 😊 (You can now find it here: Do the exam markers for DCT need a reality check?)

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Philosophy 2024 Exam Predictions

As I say every year, it is impossible to accurately predict exam questions due to the magnitude of questions the exam board could ask. The exam board also deliberately ask curveball questions to avoid people like me ‘accurately’ predicting the questions. They may ask questions that have previously featured in the first or second year exams (even the exact same wording could be used) or they may ask questions on areas of the specification never asked before. For example, last year the examiner’s asked a question on Descartes and a very similar question on Descartes appeared the year before in the first year exam. With this in mind, these predictions are just my own musings and may be completely wrong, so you must still revise all areas on the spec. But if I was going to write an exam paper this is how I would do it…

  1. Plato/ Aristotle: Evaluate the claim that Aristotle’s Prime Mover is far clearer than Plato’s Form of the Good (or rationalism vs empiricism).​ My reasoning is because Plato has not been asked in three years, a compare question was asked in the first year exam last year and Aristotle wasn’t on last year. Examiner’s also like compare questions as they are more challenging.
  2. Arguments for Existence of God (I doubt you will be asked two questions from this section):
    • Teleological: “The challenge of evolution far outweighs the evidence of a designer God.” Discuss.​ Area of the spec that has never been asked in the first or second year exam.
    • Cosmological: “The logical fallacies in Aquinas’ first three ways cannot be overcome.” Discuss. Or “Hume’s criticisms against the cosmological argument are effective.” Discuss. ​No Cosmological question has been asked in the second year.
    • Ontological: Critically assess the view that existence can be treated as a predicate.​ Only one question has been asked on the Ontological argument in the second year exam (Gaunilo – 2021), also ‘predicate’ is a clear part of the spec that has not appeared in the first year exams either.
    • Teleological/ Cosmological/ Ontological: “An a posteriori argument is far more persuasive than  an a priori argument.” Discuss.​ Discussion point on the spec that has never been asked – would be a challenging question if they did.
  3. Religious Language Apophatic (Analogy): “Aquinas’ analogical approach does not support effective expression of language about God.” Discuss​ Part of the spec that has not been asked and Religious Language hasn’t been on exam since 2021 (not to be confused with Religious Language 20th century which was on last year).
  4. Nature of God: “Swinburne successfully resolves the problems surrounding God’s omniscience and human free will.” Discuss Or “God cannot have divine foreknowledge and be fully benevolent.” Discuss​ A number of areas of NOG that have not been asked, so two obvious questions would be Swinburne and/or benevolence. There is going to be at least one question from the second year topics.

If you are asked three Q from first year topics, other alternatives might be: John Hick (POE), Materialism/ critics of the concept of soul (Body, Mind, Soul) or psychological/ physiological / critics of RE (Religious experience)​. These are clear areas of the spec that have not been asked before.

I hope your revision continues to go really well! Don’t forget to join the live stream on Sunday 9th June at 6.00 on YouTube for any last minute exam support. Good luck and remember you have worked very hard for the last two years so this is your time to show off!!

*Note: I sometimes refer to the exams by the first and second year. This is because OCR still set a paper for students who wish to sit the exam in the first year of the course (formerly known as the AS year), however most colleges no longer do this. The second year refers to the full A level exam (sat by everyone who completes the course) covering all 32 units.

RS Exam Support 2024

Powerpoint of Past Exam Questions:

Powerpoint of Gaps and Possible Questions:

Predictions:

Also check out Philosophy 2024 Exam Predictions for the reasoning behind my predictions.

Live Streams for last minute exam support (membership exclusive):

Philosophy:

Ethics:

DCT:

Don’t forget to check out the Examiner’s Report summaries (Examiner’s Reports Summary (2022-2023) and Goldilocks and the Three Exam Papers) These will give you an insight into what the examiner;s are looking for and what to avoid.